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Shaxir is on an epic mission to save Xedina from Maleficent and Pete. The mission stated that any who partook in it to had to "fight a sea of heartless". Well, it looks like the heartless read the mission description too, and are surging after the two escaping Nobodies like a raging river as one of the leading heartless commands a tidal wave of other heartless!

Shaxir fails at saving people! XD Look how's he's carrying Xedina! Wow... Apparently he never took Phil's hero lessons.

"When rescuing a damsel, handle with care!" *dummy smashes into a mountain* XD That scene from Hercules was great!

That castle is also a fail too. IT LOOKS NOTHING LIKE THE DISNEY CASTLE! XP

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:iconodln:
Nice little story. You have the colors right. It looks very cartoonish if that's what you're going for. I do see a little improvement. But it would help if you have things like a dynamic angle. You can also look up running poses from characters like "Meanstreak" from X-Men2099, "the Flash", and look up screen shots from cartoons like Sonic the Hedgehog, or the movie "The Incredibles with that super fast kid (I forget his name). Youtube has some awesome tutorials for doing up people. The sea of heartless doing that 'tidal wave' look is very interesting.

Of course, people know what this is just by looking at it so you've done your job well enough. My hats off to you and keep up the good work.

Also, is that Disney Castle or the Castle from Super Mario64?
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:iconunicornmon:
dont be droping me now!

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i am Xedina in ~Castle-Oblivion's No. XX | No. 4 in ~OrgElite
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'wings symbolize freedom for those that have none. they dont symbolize monsters' - Cissnei from CC: FFVII
:iconmetalshadowoverlord:
Shaxir may be silly, but he's careful! (Despite how it appears XD)

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-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
:iconunicornmon:
i think shes more shocked

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i am Xedina in ~Castle-Oblivion's No. XX | No. 4 in ~OrgElite
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'wings symbolize freedom for those that have none. they dont symbolize monsters' - Cissnei from CC: FFVII
:iconmetalshadowoverlord:
I'd be shocked too if someone carried me like THAT with an impending sea of doom approaching in the form of cute little shadow heartless! XD

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-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
:iconunicornmon:
and one some how wiped out on the wave

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i am Xedina in ~Castle-Oblivion's No. XX | No. 4 in ~OrgElite
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'wings symbolize freedom for those that have none. they dont symbolize monsters' - Cissnei from CC: FFVII
:iconmetalshadowoverlord:
Lol, I should have put in a surfing heartless! XD

--
-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
:iconunicornmon:
Xedina: just dont smash me in to a mountain!

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i am Xedina in ~Castle-Oblivion's No. XX | No. 4 in ~OrgElite
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'wings symbolize freedom for those that have none. they dont symbolize monsters' - Cissnei from CC: FFVII
:iconmetalshadowoverlord:
Shaxir: Wait, why am I carrying you when you can fly? XD

--
-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
:iconunicornmon:
Xedina: laughing bark*

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i am Xedina in ~Castle-Oblivion's No. XX | No. 4 in ~OrgElite
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'wings symbolize freedom for those that have none. they dont symbolize monsters' - Cissnei from CC: FFVII

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